Thursday, April 18, 2013

my bucket list

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  1. I took two points off for no transitions but other than that I loved it! I thought it was really nice that it didn't really sound like you were reading. It sounded like you were talking to me most of the time. I liked your friendly intros about yourself before each topic too! Good Job Sara :)

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  2. I loved your presentation. It was very apparent that you put time into choosing your ten items. Your discussion about why you chose each one was exceptional. In addition, you used music very effectively. Your voice was clear and distinct. This presentation was near perfect. The only fault I saw was minor. You could have used a closing sentence. Your citation page was well done. 99%

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    1. Oh thank you mrs. Lang I really enjoyed this project and I put a lot of work into it . I am so excited for my grade on this thank you I so very much , I was worried that I was going to lose a lot of points because of the time , I just had so much to say . Thank you agian !

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